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Proofreading for Bruce's recent round of documentation proofreading.

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Most of those changes were good, but some not so good ...
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Tom Lane
2009-06-17 21:58:49 +00:00
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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml,v 1.58 2009/04/27 16:27:35 momjian Exp $ -->
<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/advanced.sgml,v 1.59 2009/06/17 21:58:48 tgl Exp $ -->
<chapter id="tutorial-advanced">
<title>Advanced Features</title>
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<para>
This chapter will on occasion refer to examples found in <xref
linkend="tutorial-sql"> to change or improve them, so it will be
good if you have read that chapter. Some examples from
useful to have read that chapter. Some examples from
this chapter can also be found in
<filename>advanced.sql</filename> in the tutorial directory. This
file also contains some sample data to load, which is not
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</para>
<para>
The details of these commands are not important; the important
The details of these commands are not important here; the important
point is that there are several separate updates involved to accomplish
this rather simple operation. Our bank's officers will want to be
assured that either all these updates happen, or none of them happen.