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Doc: proofreading for v12 release notes.

Mostly markup improvements, with a couple of grammar fixes.

Liudmila Mantrova

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAEkD-mDxVV1Hrxzo3-hPaS5b1s-+Gin+9Cbu2eMBqRovRVjC0w@mail.gmail.com
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Tom Lane
2019-09-23 10:40:42 -04:00
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@ -608,7 +608,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
<para>
Treat object-name columns in
the <link linkend="information-schema"><structname>information_schema</structname></link>
views as being of type <type>name</type> not <type>varchar</type>
views as being of type <type>name</type>, not <type>varchar</type>
(Tom Lane)
</para>
@ -969,7 +969,7 @@ Author: Heikki Linnakangas <heikki.linnakangas@iki.fi>
<para>
Reduce the <acronym>WAL</acronym> write overhead
of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym> and
of <acronym>GiST</acronym>, <acronym>GIN</acronym>, and
<acronym>SP-GiST</acronym> index creation (Anastasia Lubennikova,
Andrey V. Lepikhov)
</para>
@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ Author: Stephen Frost <sfrost@snowman.net>
-->
<para>
Allow <link linkend="storage-toast"><literal>TOASTed</literal></link>
Allow <link linkend="storage-toast">toasted</link>
values to be minimally decompressed (Paul Ramsey)
</para>
@ -1305,7 +1305,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
-->
<para>
Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE .. SET
Allow <link linkend="sql-altertable"><command>ALTER TABLE ... SET
NOT NULL</command></link> to avoid unnecessary table scans (Sergei
Kornilov)
</para>
@ -1323,7 +1323,7 @@ Author: Noah Misch <noah@leadboat.com>
-->
<para>
Allow <command>ALTER TABLE .. SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
Allow <command>ALTER TABLE ... SET DATA TYPE</command> changing between
<type>timestamp</type> and <type>timestamptz</type> to avoid a
table rewrite when the session time zone is <acronym>UTC</acronym>
(Noah Misch)
@ -1438,7 +1438,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
<para>
Progress is reported in the <link
linkend="create-index-progress-reporting"><structname>pg_stat_progress_create_index</structname></link>
system view
system view.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2235,7 +2235,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.vondra@postgresql.org>
</para>
<para>
This output can also be obtained in <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
This output can also be obtained when using <xref linkend="auto-explain"/>
by setting <varname>auto_explain.log_settings</varname>.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2620,7 +2620,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
<para>
Add connection parameter <xref linkend="libpq-tcp-user-timeout"/>
to control libpq's <acronym>TCP</acronym> timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
to control <application>libpq</application>'s <acronym>TCP</acronym>
timeout (Ryohei Nagaura)
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2631,9 +2632,9 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
Allow libpq (and thus psql) to report only
the <literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier
Gautheron)
Allow <application>libpq</application> (and thus
<application>psql</application>) to report only the
<literal>SQLSTATE</literal> value in error messages (Didier Gautheron)
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2644,7 +2645,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
Add libpq
Add <application>libpq</application>
function <link linkend="libpq-pqresultmemorysize"><function>PQresultMemorySize()</function></link>
to report the memory used by a query result (Lars Kanis, Tom Lane)
</para>
@ -2657,7 +2658,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
-->
<para>
Remove the no-display/debug flag from libpq's
Remove the no-display/debug flag from <application>libpq</application>'s
<literal>options</literal> connection parameter (Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
@ -2729,8 +2730,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
-->
<para>
Allow vacuumdb to disable waiting for locks or skipping all-visible
pages (Nathan Bossart)
Allow <application>vacuumdb</application> to disable waiting for locks
or skipping all-visible pages (Nathan Bossart)
</para>
<para>
@ -2835,9 +2836,13 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE, CREATE TRIGGER,
CREATE EVENT TRIGGER, ANALYZE, EXPLAIN, VACUUM, ALTER TABLE,
ALTER INDEX, ALTER DATABASE, ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
Improve tab completion of <command>CREATE TABLE</command>,
<command>CREATE TRIGGER</command>,
<command>CREATE EVENT TRIGGER</command>,
<command>ANALYZE</command>, <command>EXPLAIN</command>,
<command>VACUUM</command>, <command>ALTER TABLE</command>,
<command>ALTER INDEX</command>, <command>ALTER DATABASE</command>,
and <command>ALTER INDEX ALTER COLUMN</command>
(Dagfinn Ilmari Mannsåker, Tatsuro Yamada, Michaël Paquier,
Tom Lane, Justin Pryzby)
</para>
@ -2878,8 +2883,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
Improve precision of pgbench's <option>--rate</option>
option (Tom Lane)
Improve precision of <application>pgbench</application>'s
<option>--rate</option> option (Tom Lane)
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2889,8 +2894,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
2018-10-15 [5b75a4f82] pgbench: Report errors during run better
-->
<para>
Improve pgbench's error reporting with clearer messages and return
codes (Peter Eisentraut)
Improve <application>pgbench</application>'s error reporting with
clearer messages and return codes (Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
</listitem>
@ -3160,7 +3165,7 @@ existin
<para>
This enables the development of new <link linkend="tableam">table
access methods</link>, which can optimize storage for different
use-cases. The existing <literal>heap</literal> access method
use cases. The existing <literal>heap</literal> access method
remains the default.
</para>
</listitem>