doc: PG 14 relnote updates

Reported-by: Justin Pryzby

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20210612034551.GU16435@telsasoft.com

doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml

@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Add Set Server Name Indication (<acronym>SNI</acronym>) for
+       Add Server Name Indication (<acronym>SNI</acronym>) for
        <acronym>SSL</acronym> connection packets (Peter Eisentraut)
       </para>
 
@@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Allow vacuum to deallocate space reserved by trailing unused heap
+        Allow vacuum to reclaim space used by unused trailing heap
         line pointers (Matthias van de Meent, Peter Geoghegan)
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -771,8 +771,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        <link linkend="sql-vacuum"><command>VACUUM</command></link>
+        <link linkend="sql-vacuum"><command>VACUUM</command></link> now
-        now has a <literal>PROCESS_TOAST</literal> which can be set to
+        has a <literal>PROCESS_TOAST</literal> option which can be set to
         false to disable <acronym>TOAST</acronym> processing, and <link
         linkend="app-vacuumdb"><application>vacuumdb</application></link>
         has a <option>--no-process-toast</option> option.
@@ -799,7 +799,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <pg@bowt.ie>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Cause vacuum operations to be aggressive if the table is near
+        Cause vacuum operations to be more aggressive if the table is near
         xid or multixact wraparound (Masahiko Sawada, Peter Geoghegan)
        </para>
 
@@ -911,8 +911,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Allow the arbitrary collations of partition boundary values
+        Allow arbitrary collations of partition boundary values (Tom Lane)
-        (Tom Lane)
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -1107,7 +1106,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        Previously, if the object already exists,
+        Previously, if the object already existed,
         <command>EXPLAIN</command> would fail.
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1504,7 +1503,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akapila@postgresql.org>
        </para>
 
        <para>
-        Function <link
+        The function <link
         linkend="monitoring-stats-functions"><function>pg_stat_reset_replication_slot()</function></link>
         resets slot statistics.
        </para>
@@ -2050,7 +2049,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akapila@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Generate <acronym>WAL</acronym> invalidations message during
+        Generate <acronym>WAL</acronym> invalidation messages during
         command completion when using logical replication (Dilip Kumar,
         Tomas Vondra, Amit Kapila)
        </para>
@@ -2260,6 +2259,8 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
 <!--
 Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 2021-02-04 [c5b286047] Add TABLESPACE option to REINDEX
+Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
+2021-03-03 [57e6db706] Add - -tablespace option to reindexdb
 -->
 
       <para>
@@ -2270,6 +2271,9 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 
       <para>
        This is done by specifying a <literal>TABLESPACE</literal> clause.
+       A <option>--tablespace</option> option was also added to <link
+       linkend="app-reindexdb"><application>reindexdb</application></link>
+       to control this.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -2553,9 +2557,9 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Add support for infinity and <literal>-infinity</literal> values
+       Add support for <literal>infinity</literal> and
-       to the <link linkend="datatype-numeric">numeric data type</link>
+       <literal>-infinity</literal> values to the <link
-       (Tom Lane)
+       linkend="datatype-numeric">numeric data type</link> (Tom Lane)
       </para>
 
       <para>
@@ -3102,7 +3106,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       New options are <literal>read-only</literal>,
+       The new options are <literal>read-only</literal>,
        <literal>primary</literal>, <literal>standby</literal>, and
        <literal>prefer-standby</literal>.
       </para>
@@ -3167,23 +3171,6 @@ Author: Michael Meskes <meskes@postgresql.org>
      <listitem>
 <!--
 Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
-2021-03-03 [57e6db706] Add - -tablespace option to reindexdb
--->
-
-      <para>
-       Allow <link
-       linkend="app-reindexdb"><application>reindexdb</application></link>
-       to change the tablespace of the new index (Michael Paquier)
-      </para>
-
-      <para>
-       This is done by specifying <option>--tablespace</option>.
-      </para>
-     </listitem>
-
-     <listitem>
-<!--
-Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 2020-06-22 [9550ea302] Add - -no-index-cleanup and - -no-truncate to vacuumdb.
 -->